America Rules, How Can I Teach Some Childeren to Don't Break the Law
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Have you ever thought about crime rate in the US? How does one restrict the number crime rate from increasing? Above of all, I realize that are many reason of the high crime rate in the benifets United State. Now, I believe the cause of the high crime rate in United State cities because some families don't teach their children the rules about the law very well. Second, many families are suffer due to poverty. Third, there are many families that don't have an education to make them life better. Crime rate in the united state treat all people how to developed people to learn many things from the law, fight due to poverty that make them understand clearly and there are many families that don't have an education to make them life better.
some families don't teach their children the rules about the law very well.
First of all, Why didn't send tthere some people in united state they can't teach their children about how to make them life a fabulous. Then, they got trouble at the first time when they make conversation with community , I realize that it is happen when you don't have time to stay with your children and teach them how to respect any opinion when you got start a great conversation. For instance, I know a girl her name is Kaily. She is from California. She is fantastic girl. I like her opinion when she said to me, "Don't worry!!! Be happy." I don't know why she side that to me. Not sure how these two things go together? And I feel like you are very off topic.?!!??! Later, I knew why she said that because you have to respect people and then your life much better. After that, I believe is no terrible with cool people.
Second, many families are suffer due to poverty.
Actually, I can't imagine you built yourself without money. If you have a good dream and then you can't do it? Why? I will tell you, because you don't have enough money to made it. I mean if you have money you can do what would you want. Also, you should restrict the number of crimes because you already knew about how to respect people how is the culture shock is more important for everyone live on the world. Now, money is more important to teach you about crime and then you can't break the law. Perhaps if you got some money you can go school and then you can what is the crime was the worst problem you can got from any student study with you or your professor. Again the topic is what do you believe is the cause of high crime rate in some US cities? Your thesis is good but your supporting paragraphs aren't connected well to those ideas.
Third, there are many families that don't have an education to make them life better
On the whole, I would you want to ask many questions about the crime, "Why are crimes the worst things?" how I can fix it? What
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