Analyses of a Previous Essay

Analyses of a previous essay

My writing teacher, asked me to write an previous essay and I chose my writing process essay as a topic to analyze my writing ; In my writing process essay, I talked about how people can choose the place that can make them feel comfortable in. and can make them think and gather the ideas and the information. Also, the essay talked about how we can write in interesting and formal way, how we can attract the readers, and how we can improve our writing process and make it better than before, and what are the things that help us to write better. Also how to write the introduction and the conclusion in a good way and how is the writing process important. Further, I can improve my writing by read some articles, write short stories, and do some searches. No matter how many time we make mistakes in writing but the important thing is to learn from these mistakes. I want to improve my writing more and more until I feel that my writing is good and everybody like it, because writing is important in our life sometimes we cannot pass on our senses through sound, but some of us feel that writing is much easier than talk. That is why I want to improve my writing and make it better and better.

In addition, I think my writing process works for me because I discover that sitting in quite room with a pen and paper next to me would help me to gather the ideas and the information. Moreover, Quiet environment and a comfortable place usually help me organizing my thoughts not only gathering them. It helps me to reread the essay in loud voice, when I do that I can recognize my mistakes in writing and that would help me in the future. Driving all my focus in my main topic helps me to never get off the topic for example sometimes when I could not find any ideas about a specific subject I look back to the topic and reread what I wrote, that would help me to think and find more ideas about it. Also, the thing that always helps me in writing is to go to someone is good at writing to chick my writing and gives me some ideas about it and tell me if I have to make some changes on it if needed. After that, I rewrite the essay correctly and neatly, then I go to my family or my friends and show them my writing to see if they like it or not or if they have some suggestion about it and rewrite it again. The last thing that I do is to go to the writing lab to chick the essay and look at my grammar and my sentences, and after that I handout it to my teacher.

Furthermore, in my previous essay I did not use any of logos, ethos, pathos because I did not know them and I did not know what they mean, but after I handout my essay to the teacher, he taught us what they mean and where I use them and how. Now I am looking forward to use them in the next essay and learn more about it. I think logos, pathos, and ethos are helpful in writing. I can use them to analyze my essay, and I can support my thesis by using